And - the whole point is - someone else will read your copy, and from their perspective ultimately ask "So what?" or in other words - "What's in it for me?" In a nutshell, what we have to communicate is what will be a benefit to the reader. It's not about "I" the writer - it's about "you" the reader.
My neighbor recently got started in a business that he wanted me to consider, and as he made his presentation, he pointed out feature after feature of the company and product line. Unfortunately, the age and size of the company, and prices of different packages just had me thinking - "Yeah, so - what does that mean for me?"
For example - a huge number of product options is a fine feature, but on the other hand - letting me know that I or my prospective customers would be able to find a great fit for any personality, style, need or situation would have done much better at getting my interest - by letting me know how I would benefit.
When you're considering the benefit your reader will get, think about problems you will solve for them. Deal with the emotions of pain and pleasure they could avoid or feel, for example: reduced frustration because you're offering them a proven system; more pride because they will look better or be a leader; the pleasure of the fine things money can buy, or; the little effort they'll have to put out because your product or system is so quick and easy.
What's a good way to get the information across? Tell a story. Give your reader something they can get involved in from real life. Or teach them something. As I mentioned in an early post, you want to not simply pitch, but give value. Here's a word to consider: "sellucation". Remember that people don't want to be sold, but they can enjoy buying when they're confident of their informed decision.
To close, I hope to have given some useful tips to consider and use. Again, writing good copy is an important learning process. Study those writers whom you respond to, and don't plagiarize, but do pick up tricks. You can learn from some top pro's here: http://vur.me/Sundance03/traffic Write on!




